My original idea.

My plot – Revenge is sometimes sweet.

·         Two main characters are: two sisters called Karen and Sam (dead)

The plot

·         Karen had a sister called Sam, who was an intelligent and career minded teen, the complete opposite to her outgoing party girl sister.

·         Sam was reluctantly dragged to a party by her more outgoing friends, whilst at the party her drink was spiked, as a result of this she fell down the stairs at the nerds n naughty’s house party, and died when no one came to her rescue.

·         After Sam’s death Karen, wants to avenge her little sisters, misfortunate and unexpected death, Karen accesses Facebook through her sisters account to see who went to the party, she wants revenge, and someone to blame for her sister’s death.

·         When Karen finds the party event list of attendees, she finds who she considers maybe the main targets for spiking her sisters drink, which includes a group of 4 of the ‘it’ boys from the high school, who were into taking drugs, n something clicked in Karen that it was them. 

·         Karen had to do something to take revenge over her sister’s killers, she uses Facebook to pose as her dead sister sending messages from the grave to her killers, after some time of threats and disturbing messages to the suspects, they meet up as a group and come to the conclusion that it’s all a big wind up.

·         Although one of the four begins to get guilty and confides in another of the group members who takes the piss out him, as it’s not real, n it’s just a stupid prank.

·         But when they turn on their computers and hear the voice of Sam from beyond the grave tormenting them, through their, Facebook, emails, phones and even their home computers, it becomes too much for a member of the group and he commits suicide.

·         After this the 3 that are left from the disturbed, but guilty group meet up, one of them starts an argument accusing the rest of them that the prank has gone too far. One of the others pushes him into an open burial ground, and convinces the other weaker one that it’s his fault and they bury him alive.

·         But when the torment continues, and the paranoia and guilt sets in, can the remaining two figure out who it is?

·         When the last two, are invited to a rave, by Sam’s sister Karen, they are well up for it as they may be able to ask Karen about who might be doing this, and also use the rave as a get away from the mind boggling torment.

·         When they get to the rave and Karen offers to sell them some drugs to help take the edge off their friends dying, they accept like a shot, but unfortunately they have been got by their own game, the drugs are a lethal compound of many prescription drugs. And of course the two, are rushed to hospital, of which Karen hopes for their permanent extermination, and what appears to be unexplained deaths, as the drug is untraceable.

·         Karen is satisfied that she has got revenge for her sister’s death, but could one of the thought to be dead boys, be crashing back down to earth with a bang to their revenge on her.....................